Monday, October 22, 2007



THE BRAVE VOLUNTEERS

Written by Ralph Allen


Scared, Cold, in pain,the dust hasn't settled yet.Pinned in, crying,my clothes are ripped, red, and wet.


Lights, noise, and confusion,all part of the night.I'm going to die alone,give up the fight.


Red lights are flashing,mixing with blue.A face appears at my window,the face is you.


"You're gonna be all right"
is the first thing you say.A reassuring voice,someone wants me to stay.


You could have been home with family,they need you too.You worked all day at the job,your sleeping hours numbered two.


But you went down the hall,hoping your family is OK. Now you're here with me and Death,with comforting words to say.


No time for yourself,
no thought for your safety. Later you may think,your decision was hasty."Get the Jaws. Watch that gas; Keep the people away. Get his vitals, hose this down."


Some things I hear them say.
You stand in gas, look in my window,show no fear.I look back at you knowing,your voice is the last I'll ever hear.


I fade away as you hold me,while holding back your tears.Thank you for being there,


You Brave Volunteers

30 comments:

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

Im the first comment...YEAH!!!! YEAH!!!

Ok... i have another story.It's Scary... it's called...
STAYING AT A RELAXING HOTEL!!!!

Scary... everythings quiet, calm, serene... the employees are illuminating... Thats the problem.

Everythings TOO F#$%ing Nice!!!

I hope u understand my tortue...

lol

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...
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Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

i left cuz.. i live in escondido... and it's raining ash

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

it's raining really hard

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

i left cuz of the fire :(

derek's blog said...

well you should be srry 4 making my head hurt! :-( haha im the.......ummm.......wait im counting...1,2,3,4 wat comes after four???..OH!5 ha i knew that...5,......6!!!! HA in ur face bernie im the sixth person to comment so HA!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

haha im number 7 :b

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

stoopid compy wont let me on AIM

derek's blog said...

o well guess wat im number 9. HA WHAT NOW!!!!!!!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

GRR...10 FOOL!!!! Im watching The Lion King... WHY DID MOOFASA HAVE TO DIE! WAHHH

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

Moofasa ... moofasa... MoOfAsA... mOoFaSa... MOOFASA!

derek's blog said...

grr number 11. moofosa my ass its all about timone and pumba!

Cailin the Yeti said...

yay!!! i'm number 12!
woo party.
it was really gross.
when i got home there was ash all over.
the street wasnt black, like normal, it was a light grey color.
and its toxic.
like the brittney spears song!
i dont know why i said that...
well yes.
i hate this fire.
i cant go outside.
and now my parents want to cut down the pinetrees that grow next to my house!
the trees are awesome!
i love them.
the braches touch my window.
its really cool.
but now its like byebye pine trees!
see ya never. it sux.
well. i'm bored.
comment me back my loove
HA now its not JUST bernie and derek on this thingy.
how cool am i?
awesome...i know =]

Cailin the Yeti said...

wait...what thing on saturday?
and what evac center are you going to help out at?

Cailin the Yeti said...

OOH THE CARNIVAL AT LA COSTA MEADOWS!!!!
yesss, we are going to be in the honted house =]
you can probally be in it also...if you go in early and sign your name on the paper...
thats what i'm doing.
yessss this will be fun now.
so you, tyler, and your friend jenna are going to be there...
COOL!!!! now i cant wait!!

derek's blog said...

HAHA! i have one now i just dnt know how to use it. :-(???

derek's blog said...

O ya tell eyerone though cause I dnt want to type the same thing ovr and ovr again

Cailin the Yeti said...

i'm really bored.
i would rather be at school than be a couch potato
i know crazyrighttt?

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

NUMBER 19!!! PSPS ATTACK!!!!(::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+) (::__+)

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

MOOFAFA IS THE BOMB U MESS WITH HIM IM GONNA....umm...umm...lemme think... mango... i know!!! IM GONNA WRITE U A VERY ANGRY LETTER!!!! yeah!!!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

im gonna start using a new word... WHOMP!!!!

derek's blog said...

try bigdthebozman

derek's blog said...

22!!!!!!!! muhhahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahah!.......ha. WHAT NOW BITCHES!!!!!!!!!! ha-ha-haha-...ha

Cailin the Yeti said...

hey, watch your language buddy!
bitches is not a very nice word =]
number 23 is wayyyyy better than all the rest...

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

u know wats better then 23... 24! MUHHAHAHA!!!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

MOOFASA!!!! BEATS U ALL!!!!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

im bored...

im comin back to my house today!

woot! then ill be on mypace!!!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

change of plans

im not comin back to my house

IM GOING 2 KNOTTS SCARY FARM!

OoOoOoOoOoOOoOo scary!

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

"put out the fire boys,
don't stop, don't stop"

This time im comin home FOR SURE today

Bernie... ROCKS!!!!! said...

Make a new post!!!! so many comments.... head is dizzy...